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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I was in half daze of haze sleepy slumber eyes, startled by phones ring. "Hello", I said. One word was heard, a smile crept in from the warmth of need fulfilled. "I just called to let you know that this is where we're at and where we've yet to go." We talked, and laughed amidst many "I miss you's" and then, "So now do you know where I'm at?" "Well yes, I do! But the question is do you know too?" "Well there are two places..." your voice trailed... and I could feel the twinkle in your eyes as I grinned.. "Really, two? Then please tell me just where are you?" "A little town called Hopewell, tomorrow we start.... but always......... {always} I'm there in your heart." I could have flooded a river with the flow of my tears, I have never felt you so far, yet so near... Finally, you understand. It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (08-19-2004 09:21 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
smiles....a lovely write, filled with understanding, awareness and a willingness to allow, to help, to be gentle...this voice proved unconditional love. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
how beautifully expressed is this? VERY Loved this lady, this is a beauty that touches my smile  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Isn't communication just the best? When everyone not only knows where they are... but where they belong! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 thanks much ladies, ya'll know, I  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
**sigh** this one sure touches the heart...I could feel your love flow gently through each word and they brought tears to my eyes...I love it... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderfully expressed , nothing could feel better than finally having an understanding Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yaknow, I thought this about mine too...it's a great feeling yes I hope yours lasts though |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Popping in to say thank you all so very much. It's the busy time of month at work again and time is limited, wish I could be here more. Hugs to all and peace! |
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