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Tantric Breathing
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Tantric Breathing * Like those of tantric lovers; Respiring, Darks and brights. Lungs of earth breathe in And out, in rhythms, night Consuming heat at eventide, That dawn and day expired; * Repeats, A soundless sharing In the movement of the air. The chest of night swells higher When the same of days, Decrease... * Yin breathes-in the void, and then Expels it from her heart; Yang accepts the invisible gifts, Into the portals of his chest. * Echo's quite the same, earth and woman-man, are like arranged In give and take Of vital forces by exchange. * Love vows left unsaid, yet shared; Sitting yab-yum, folded arms around Entangled humans bring to union, Energy that's found, in every breath; Separate hearts then melting into one. [This message has been edited by ice (08-19-2004 12:24 PM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Love vows left unsaid, yet shared; Sitting yab-yum, folded arms around Entangled humans bring to union, Energy that's found, in every breath; Separate hearts then melting into one Loved the entire concept of this write, very deep and yet, self-explainatory we are one within man/woman...woman/man and do so believe there is one special person for every human being which compliments the soul....finding them, is another story? Smiles and hugs...good good write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Couldn't pick a favorite verse out of this, because I just truly loved it all. This is excellent ice! Just perfect.  |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"Love vows left unsaid, yet shared; Sitting yab-yum, folded arms around Entangled humans bring to union, Energy that's found, in every breath; Separate hearts then melting into one." `````````````````````````````` you brought me to *SIGH* Yes this is very fulfilling |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
leave this on the nightstand... most men have no concept of this spiritual/physical union, only wanting to park their car into the garage and then to make a quick exit.......... nicely woven together iceman |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
ice The harmony of in and out of earth and man is so apparent in this wonderful poem...thank you for writing it so well!! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
LeeJ yes, "one within"...Man/woman-Woman/man" When breaths are exchanged we become one and the same, and are truly unified with the universe....Thanks for the "good good" reply. Gentle Spirit (I love that nic... )"loved it all"...sigh.....all I can say is thank you. Muted..Hey, I stole your line "sigh") sorry about that. "Fulfilling" is a very nice compliment Thank you. Inky I suppose there are times when simply a physical union is acceptable, but when the union is spiritual and physical at the same time, more than just sparks fly...lol, I love your comment about the car and the garage.... Martie A compliment such as this, from one who has woven many dreams in my mind, (by reading their poetry)Is very flattering... Thank you for those dreams and this reply... ------ice/ford ><> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
sitting silently breathing this in HMMMMMM vibrating |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I never know what to expect when opening one of yours...always delighted |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Just as beautiful as when you show me this the other night. Beautifully written :-) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very exquisite poem, Ice.  ....jo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Echo's quite the same, earth and woman-man, are like arranged In give and take Of vital forces by exchange. ~*~ You had me with breathing... you kept me with echoes...  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Midnight sun To sit silently and breathe is exactly the way I would like everyone to be when they read this..and vibrating.... That is such a sensual act... Thank you P.S. I am delighted that you were delighted.... Thank you Froggy You did get a sneak preview, Glad you think it beautiful Thank you iliana-jo "exquisite" That's a pretty big word, "Very" in front of it is very flattering. Thank you Sunshine You centered the whole point of the poem, a breath is but a breath, but when it is taken into the lungs of a lover and then returned, it becomes and echo...one that does not stop it's reverberation until the lovers choose it to.. Thank you Again, Thank you (all) for reading and the kind replies --------ice ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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