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The Roar of Choas
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The Roar of Choas |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Roar of Chaos The roar of chaos strikes my ear And wets me with the sweat of fear It storms about my valleys green And havoc is the only scene The dragons fire belches high Lighting it with fires fly Spilling rain of acid flame Making sulfurs yellow bane There is no rainbow path to run It leached the color from the sun It killed the shadows growth and play Its eaten up the light of day My eyes tear brine this sour wine My tongue is swollen with the dine I cower in my covers core And damn the echoes bringing more Each sense does strike a blow my mind And for the moment I am blind |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Such chaos has that effect I’m sure you’ll find order again And sight, like the insight Seen in your poetry Gloom |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Seymour, much enjoyed dear friend, may things find a calm for you. Sincerely Rick |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 dear sweet Sy...these words certainly deserve a hug...even though you write such beautiful song...this one this morning was sad... Hope all will be well soon. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Sy... You flip my flop from day to day and I am happy until you're gray then I'm sad and wear a frown... but wait, if I stand me upside down and then would wear an upside frown do you think I'd gain a smile this day?  |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
It felt like I was sitting in the center of an incredible storm watching the destruction of it all around...A Stunning piece of work...You are one fantastic writer who draws me to your work knowing I will feast upon wonderful visions...thank you... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A powerful poem to start my day... excellent! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang you described it well |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ahah! I see you have been peeking in my window again  Chaos seems my middle name these days, and trust me you nailed it to the core with your usual Randy roar. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The dragons fire belches high Lighting it with fires fly Spilling rain of acid flame Making sulfurs yellow bane There is no rainbow path to run It leached the color from the sun It killed the shadows growth and play Its eaten up the light of day My eyes tear brine this sour wine My tongue is swollen with the dine I cower in my covers core And damn the echoes bringing more =========================== Randy spits fire and your rhymes fly higher.. Me thinks its time to cool the chaos with some raspberry tea in Shangri-la. In the meantime we'll give Randy some Tums and TLC for his tummy. *ww*   :loveya |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hope you are well, my friend. Been wondering if you were affected by the Storm.  ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Not the srorm only losing my brother. Thank you dear. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I was so sorry to hear of the loss of your brother, Sweet Sonneteer. Your pain is clearly evident with this emotive write and I wrap you in a blanket of loving energy. God bless you all. Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
Beautiful poem. Good sentence structure and content. I am sorry to hear it was written out of loss. My deepest condolences. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Seymour, dear man, I am so sorry to hear of your loss. I am not much good at knowing what the right thing to say is at times like this. Just know that you have been and are in my thoughts. Sending a basket full of my hugs to you right now. ....jo |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thinking about ya Sy...take care. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear Sy |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
My prayers are with you, Sy...now your storm becomes clear...**hugs and prayers** |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 sending you a rainbow and a hug |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I know what it is to lose a brother, and you have all my sympathy. Excellent poem. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
My dear friend, I did not see your daily fare upon our plate this day and I wondered if all was well. This poem aches with sadness, a degree of your own fear and the frustration that life sometimes brings to us. I know that the loss of your brother brings great pain to your heart as well as may bring to surface your own tenderness. Know that my heart is with you in your journey. For we love you as who you are to us, a brother as well. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
My sympathies, Sy. Been there. They said that he was the healthy one. And here I sit . . . Life is ephemeral, regardless how we define it. -glider- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my friends, I am deeply touched with your response to my loss. I am well and will be back soon. thank you again. |
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