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Straight From The Heart
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Straight From The Heart |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Straight From The Heart When writing it all down In words plain to see My feelings are written Wherever you might be My heart opens for you A key I gave to keep Love is never shallow The feelings grow deep From beginning to end I promise you will see Read across each line Love written in sincerity Wherever there's a will There's always a way Until the end of forever Depths of love I convey Times of your absence Love never grew less Straight from the heart Words to you I express Hope©2004 |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
"love is never shallow" How true! That is one pool you cannot simply wade in. Nicely written!! If you're not yourself, then there is no you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
My heart opens for you A key I gave to keep Love is never shallow The feelings grow deep I like this loving poem very much! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we speak from the heart, they speak from the minds, if they speak at all I think sometimes we hold on too long |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Dixie is of course dead on the mark! Sometimes it is better to move on, than to hold on. Nicely worded poem Hope. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Times of your absence Love never grew less Straight from the heart Words to you I express Beautifully written and expressed Thank you for sharing. |
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