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Somethin Bout Others
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Somethin Bout Others |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Catching up with today’s savers Weaving reed baskets Whipping a meringue of shoulders To an open air lobby Forming every moment Restoring us… I am the daughter of poor in A jewel isle of the sun, just one of them Telling of ascension, it’s only a movie One of which I’ve felt before Have you noticed? Streams are flowing heavier Only seven days in a week Is it Friday Yet? I’m floating on an ocean of elevation One leg hanging over the side Evening stars setting every night Holding open a doorway Translating spirals of sacred flames In all magnificence, destiny’s people dancing Two genders collide, where oneness expands Anti aging physical training Integrating betterment for all If every single human being thought about unity…and their connections About the vast effects we have with every single decision we make; and every single life we touch in a good way or a not so good way... If we touch others in a not so good way, How we change their lives...for the not so good How our creations would certainly expand If Courtesy were a source of manifestation If we realized, emotional, mental & spiritual expression was not Co-dependent on another’s approval or love…which is unparalleled permission To be successful…what is happy? Happy is rejoicing for another’s success, it is here, waiting parallel To take our hands… Loving unconditional is a consciousness to a mutual consent with self Collecting harmony in understanding…allowance, the essence of being confidence in our belief…. We are never all on the same plain at the same time And each has a significant purpose to excel It is up to each and every one of us…to compliment and encourage No matter how far behind we might feel at that time Without anger or a feeling of rejection Feeling rejection...well simply, isn’t that another way of saying, I wanted it my way? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A read full of truth, Good morning  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 LeeJ, my thoughts, too -- but darlin' you have expressed them so, so eloquently!  and love, jo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
some would call you a pollyanna, much like me, but if only the world would take off the grey shades and wear rose colored glasses like us.......what a world it would be. hats off, filled with good old fashioned idealism |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
If every single human being thought about unity… and their connections ~*~ It could very well be a better world. Well done, LeeJ |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
How our creations would certainly expand If Courtesy were a source of manifestation If we realized, emotional, mental & spiritual expression was not Co-dependent on another’s approval or love…which is unparalleled permission To be successful…what is happy? Happy is rejoicing for another’s success, it is here, waiting parallel To take our hands… Loving unconditional is a consciousness to a mutual consent with self Collecting harmony in understanding…allowance, the essence of being confidence in our belief…. We are never all on the same plain at the same time And each has a significant purpose to excel It is up to each and every one of us…to compliment and encourage No matter how far behind we might feel at that time Without anger or a feeling of rejection Feeling rejection...well simply, isn’t that another way of saying, I wanted it my way? May very well adopt this as my new mantra. Loved it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah...yeah |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!! You have said it perfectly... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ "I’m floating on an ocean of elevation One leg hanging over the side" There is so much positive energy in much that you write...I see it again in this one...and can picture you just so, as above! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Barvo! This poem made me rise to my feet and applaud....all these statements meet with agreement in my mind..not only are they heavy with content, but put in poetic form, Like two grand gifts.. Thank you for them... ----------ice ><> |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Lee Your words spoke so many truths and I hope many people get to read this. Take care.........Sue P.S. Thank you for the lovely comment you left on my poem, Hobo. It is nice to be missed. I am in motion |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
 I saw this as a bundle of thoughts, woven together perfectly. You do this well, and I love that. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"If every single human being thought about unity…and their connections About the vast effects we have with every single decision we make; and every single life we touch in a good way or a not so good way... If we touch others in a not so good way, How we change their lives...for the not so good" oh...I can do this, sometimes daily, but then somebody comes along and spoils it! (that's just a gigglewink of me laughing at ME, LeeJ) I really wish I were more consistent. So hard to do and evolve, tho, yanno? I loved this, if you couldn't tell. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Such a remarkable write Lee J!! Enjoyed this mucho! JL |
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