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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-08-18 04:43 AM

Purple was the sky
until the blues of you stopped by,

and I
never saw a true rainbow
until today.

But you were always a neon light
that did shine in front of me,
though I could not see

clearly enough,

to follow you down that path.

So I sit here wondering,
is the sky still blue for you?

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-08-18 04:49 AM

Kacy, you said so very much in this short, colorful poem. I do love your writing. Hope you keep seeing the rainbows, girl!

....jo

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

2 posted 2004-08-18 06:25 AM

When that absent person
Wakes to new horizons,
Are his colors new?
Or just as blue as you?

Well written, Kacy, you've a touch for expressing heartaches. I hope they aren't all yours. Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-08-18 06:56 AM

A wondrous write, in which your soul is taking you by the hand and showing you something even greater...perspective and the desire to excel, is what I'm reading here...sad, and yet, knowing that everything evolves...and must...and if all is true love, it will return.

Sending you hugs

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2004-08-18 09:47 AM

I like this pondering very much... sometimes, we just can't help but wonder. *S*

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

5 posted 2004-08-18 10:58 AM

Oh Yeah, this is great! *kapow* Very well done Kacy

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2004-08-18 12:18 PM

Purple was the sky
until the blues of you stopped by,

and I
never saw a true rainbow
until today.

Oh, Kacy, this is just delicious!
I love the way that you write.
hugs, Chris

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

7 posted 2004-08-18 12:21 PM

Wonderful....you ponder with perfect vision...I love it...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-08-18 12:23 PM

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

9 posted 2004-08-18 12:27 PM

perfectly worded question...perfect poetic emotion

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2004-08-18 03:28 PM

(big angel hugs) As always you write with such pure versatility and heart, sweet friend, poets can see the sky in any color I believe and I'm sure he has noticed hues bleed together in his imagination and heart also with your gentle spirit giving him welcome and solace, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kacy, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Kazm
Member

since 2003-11-13

Posts 99

11 posted 2004-08-18 06:29 PM

I feel humble. There are so many poets here who write so well.

Kaz

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