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Horny Toad
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Horny Toad Today I watched a horny toad That croaked a very horny goad He bellowed it across the bog That sounded like a horny hog. He belched his song of pure entrance In hopes to find some pure romance And waited for an answers thump To see which way that he should jump And that he did a leaps admire A leap into the night’s desire It’s there he showed his charms natal And there he found his femme fatale It is then the moon lost its light And brought the darkness of the night And all I heard were owes and ahs Under a canopy of stars The mind’s eye makes a finer glow Then the moonlight and a peep show |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And that he did a leaps admire A leap into the night’s desire It’s there he showed his charms natal And there he found his femme fatale It is then the moon lost its light And brought the darkness of the night And all I heard were owes and ahs Under a canopy of stars The mind’s eye makes a finer glow Then the moonlight and a peep show ==================================== *smiling at you* Ya kissed the frog with your rhymes and turned him into a poetic prince... That closing couplet is poetic gold Sy-babers...and so is the poet who wrote it.   *ww*    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Good morning my Tinkerbell and where are we off to today. Maybe a little bike ride and camera play? WWRS |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Much enjoyed your write this morning Sy.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed this morning's mind's eye peep show! lol Ahhh, nothing like the stars, the moon and a horny --- ...   EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Glad you enjoyed my friend. Earth Angel Why not LOL |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well didn't this get me to grinning this Thursday morning...thank you for the chuckles, Sy...it's a great way to start the day...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Just love getting you started with a chuckle. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Smiling at you Sy! Loved this morning's read. Nothing like the stars, moon and ..toad. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
A toad's plight and moonlight...you penned the nature of romance. His song is a hit. Love, Reg |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Heh, brought a chuckle to my heart. Yes, imagination can paint a much finer picture, than the eye would perceive. Well done, Sir. CG |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
TeeHee, chuckle, chuckle. Thanks for the smile. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Glad you enjoyed. rwood, Yes it was, LOL vandana Thank you dear. CastleGuard A chuckle is my pay, thank you. Susan A smile every once in a while is good. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
lol! At one time in my life.....my last name was Goad, no lie! Somehow, that has an effect on the way I read the poem....lol. Enjoyed.....jo |
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