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To Be Held...
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To Be Held... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
To be held... As if my weight were yours alone. There are moments...just before I fall towards you. When gravity lingers in its pull. And weightless in this sudden contact. I drift within your arms. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now, there you've gone and done it... or was it the 94 degree temp melting me? |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
Love the feeling! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
 Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow Eric ! I am keepin' this one for sure. hugs to you for this gem. Chris  "At one glance |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh...you always make me sigh |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"There are moments...just before I fall towards you. When gravity lingers in its pull." I think sometimes when a poem leaves me speechless, that is about as good as it gets!  ....jo |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You somehow manage to put pure feeling into words... This is beautiful! *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderful write, but my friend, did you know gravity is much stronger then anyone previously has known....smiles and hugs, what a lovely write... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So very lovely, Eric. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Eric, I love your romantic poetry!! And, this one is beautiful, too!! Hugs, Ethel |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
great write  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Eric, Since I broke my leg, this has new meaning to me! The perfect poem this morning! I have to chuckle, as I would love to shift the weight! Take care, miscellanea |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
Very eloquent and passionate. Simple yet flowing gracefully from one line to the next with an incredibly powerful message for someone special. Well done. Kevin |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this much |
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