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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-08-16 05:44 PM

SunStroked

For every weed I pulled and tugged
and struggled to give up its hold
my thoughts were never here with me.
Instead with you, as sweat down-rolled.

Trust me to feel the same each day.
Tomorrow more-so within mind eyes
that see behind these lids when closed
those reeling moments that give rise

To wishful thinking, and fantasy tempts,
finger touch tracings, lips upon mine.
Delicate fabrics of see-through laces
to capture the image and curves of each line.

Whimsical thoughts as laughter increases,
mind doing things the past yet has seen.
Unspoken for now, the steps I will follow
'cause weeding is done and I'm now in between...

Those moments remembering, the anniversaries of
the first and the last times... falling in love.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-08-16 06:18 PM

oh Dear nt, this brought back emotions and memories I thought I had let go of.

Simply beautiful.

I'm keeping it.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2004-08-16 08:05 PM

Lovely Maureen. hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-08-16 08:36 PM

Very nice one, M lady!

...jo

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2004-08-17 09:53 AM

Tomorrow more-so within mind eyes
that see behind these lids when closed
those reeling moments that give rise

To wishful thinking, and fantasy tempts,
finger touch tracings, lips upon mine.
Delicate fabrics of see-through laces

~*~

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

5 posted 2004-08-17 10:17 AM

Oh yes...you weave a delicate vision that takes the breath away as one becomes lost in your words...Magnificent...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-08-17 12:46 PM

sigh

very touching

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

7 posted 2004-08-17 01:56 PM

Wonderful, liked this much.

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