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Baby Boomer Daddy
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Baby Boomer Daddy |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
hippy hair and a red VW Mama and me wound around your heart brown van and my baby sister Your wages so happily spent tenting Our blue station wagon broken. crushed. wrote. but not so our Mama and we celebrated Ford pickup automatic and a sassy daughter. me pushing, pricking, slicing your heart but you never came unwound silver hair and a Durango to match my pretty Mama and you campin' in the mountains with happy grandkids My baby boomer Daddy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is charming...and I'm sure he's smiling! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!! My being a grandmother who camps with her grandchildren this poem touched me.....I too was camping in the mountains...I love the whole feel and vision of this poem... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write!  |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Sunshine - thanks, I'm haven't shown him this yet Startime - good for you, it would have been so cool to camp with my grandparents. I can't imagine the fun they all have - its different than camping with your parents Thanks Passing Shadows |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I just adored the uplifting feel of this; and, gee, it does bring back memories for me of earlier times.  ....jo |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
What a sweet and fun memory. I got a real kick outta this, I bet he will too  |
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