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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2004-08-15 11:33 PM

When words are written,
I listen...

When they are naught,
I feel.

I listened,  hearing only the waves
lap upon the shore...as I reach
to feel...as I listen patiently,
as a dog would...before the Master's
paper arrives.

Braille, anyone?

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-08-15 11:43 PM

Your poetry certainly does have a sensitive texture to touch, BJ.

.....jo

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-08-16 01:01 AM

When words are written,
I listen...

When they are naught,
I feel.

Yes.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-08-16 01:46 AM

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2004-08-16 11:50 AM

Yes, you do...**hugs**

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2004-08-16 12:14 PM

So much said and felt with so few words.
Wonderful Magnus my friend.
hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2004-08-16 06:54 PM

enjoyed

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-08-16 07:21 PM

Barry,
Well said, enjoyed the feel.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2004-08-17 02:10 PM

I like this very much... and yes... sometimes even a listen needs help. *S*

Pell
Member

since 2001-09-16

Posts 134
Pacific NW

9 posted 2004-08-17 02:37 PM

Somehow I feel this describes you very well.
Enjoyed this lots.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

10 posted 2004-08-17 03:47 PM

Excellent!

Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-08-18 12:35 PM

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2004-08-18 06:33 PM

Barry so very

"When words are written,
I listen..."

Yes, you do!

barbaraj
Member

since 2003-01-24

Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada

13 posted 2004-08-21 01:33 PM

I hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to...

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