choshi
Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184
New York
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posted
2004-08-15
08:29 PM
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Calling gulls announce your awaited return those dream-filled nights- when we gazed at the full moon shimmering on dew drops.
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2004
Paul C. Cooper
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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posted
2004-08-15
08:42 PM
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Sounds of an early morning, 4:00 a.m. time... and the imagery is wonderful!
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
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posted
2004-08-15
09:23 PM
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time dangles a wedged foot till we are hanging over the raging and see that the current just might carry us choshi
You share such loving thoughts.
peace dwells in the boat oh not defined or named the one that runs the rapids and finds the calm
and still looks toward the place where emergence rushes following the sea bird
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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
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posted
2004-08-15
10:13 PM
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I heard them in the distance, Paul! Lovely verse. ....jo
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Nightshade
Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
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posted
2004-08-15
11:28 PM
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A lovely write indeed. Chris"At one glance I love you With a thousand hearts."
— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet
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Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
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Gaia
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2004-08-16
12:17 PM
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I wish that the gulls would shimmer a little less in reality
I couldn't help myself.
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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posted
2004-08-16
01:49 AM
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I knew this would be short and sweet
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muted
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since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
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2004-08-16
03:18 AM
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"Calling gulls announce your awaited return those dream-filled nights- when we gazed at the full moon shimmering on dew drops." `````````````````````````````` Im left naked by night bathed in only your light asleep in the glimmered dew drowning in reflection of you and begging the morn to slip out of sight.
Id rather bask in lover's delight.
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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
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posted
2004-08-16
08:12 AM
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i just LOVE this !!!!!
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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posted
2004-08-16
08:20 AM
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Soooooo romantic! ~ and very emotive and visual! Beautiful write!
EA
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
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2004-08-18
04:34 PM
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Calling gulls announce your awaited return those dream-filled nights- when we gazed at the full moon shimmering on dew drops.
we shimmer like dew drops as we gaze at the moon over the face of the pond the silvergulls paint our reflection
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Kazm
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since 2003-11-13
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posted
2004-08-18
06:20 PM
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This carries me to that place. I feel like this poem is a personal gift for anyone to receive by reading it.
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