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Darkened Angel
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Darkened Angel |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia 
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As they fell from grey barked trees Showing forth winters power Cold wind blew Swirling dead leaves Piles upon frosted ground Faintly hearing an Angel cry Black roses grow from the earth Pain felt upon the breeze Lonely girl sat facing a darkened Angel Black wings Shadowing her She speaks broken to her blessed one Her Angel listens unspoken With fierce tongue nature lashes out Sending water toward the ground droplets puddles glowing red Crimson like the blood Keeping her alive Her Angel sings out with a heavenly voice His wings black saintly open Rises into the sky An Amber light casts down Lonely girl incased in glow He whispers " Your pain I can take, leave be no longer" Look deepest into my eyes With one kiss upon your sweet lips Feel my heart erasing Then leave me go, be exist you "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
whiskey Good advice, good read. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sigh* yes, what Sy said |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Fantastic imagery. Love the last line.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
an act of acceptance and love...the fuel of success and learning... Well done Whiskey, nice to read. Thank You. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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