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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-07-04 06:12 PM

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I walked

and walked

it wasn't day; it wasn't night,
i wasn't asleep; i wasn't awake,

i walked,

suspended,

drifting.......

into an open field,

the corn was growing

high.....

into the arms of god,

into the face of sky (where the miracles of august live)

i walked,

and walked,

into the fields of nameless flowers;

seeking eyes so blue,

seeking you,

but you weren't there,

so i walked

along the path of
dandelions and bumblebees,
butterflies and trails of tears of love long gone;

i walked

and walked,

and waited,

for your eyes of blue.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-05-2004 09:16 AM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-07-04 07:03 PM

"it wasn't day; it wasn't night,
i wasn't asleep; i wasn't awake,

just suspended....

in an open field,

the corn was growing
high

into the arms of god,

in the face of sky.........where the miracles of august live"

What wonderful imagery Michele...
and love the ending...
did you find those eyes of blue?
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Paper Tiger
Member

since 2003-09-28

Posts 77

2 posted 2004-07-04 07:09 PM

I quite enjoyed this poem. It has such a euphoric feel to it.

We see much, observe little, and perceive less.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-07-04 07:29 PM

May those eyes of blue meet the windows to your own beautiful soul.

Lovely poem. Lovely you.

EA

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-04 07:43 PM

Michele, a beautiful description of suspended anticipation -- sounds like a vision to me......Happy 4th there lady! ....jo

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-07-04 08:14 PM

This touched me. I understand this sense of longing, of wishing.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2004-07-04 09:41 PM

inkedgoddess - bluer than a morning's cloudless sky, deeper than ocean's blue, are what they are...

BC

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

7 posted 2004-07-04 10:29 PM

how sweet; the eyes stay with us

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

8 posted 2004-07-04 10:41 PM

Hmmmmmmm........my eyes are blue. Baby blue.....bedroom eyes I have been told

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2004-07-04 11:02 PM

grinning at BB...

You write such wonderful verse Michelle...
the emotions are like crystal waters.
TD

Tequilia_Sunrise
Senior Member

since 2003-02-19

Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

10 posted 2004-07-05 03:49 AM

very sweet

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2004-07-05 04:23 AM

a precious write

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2004-07-05 05:21 AM

This is so pretty, Michele.
So sweet...I'm sure those eyes of blue are too.

Hugs,
Ethel

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

13 posted 2004-07-06 03:14 PM

Some things are worth a lot of wait and walk... the right look in those eyes can be worth everything... *S* I like this very much! *S*

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

14 posted 2004-07-06 06:29 PM

Though you keep silent,
the moon passes by unseen
behind gathered clouds-
your voice echoes everywhere
through the wind rustled pines.

~P

Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 190

15 posted 2004-07-06 06:41 PM

Sweet longing rewards await.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

16 posted 2004-07-07 09:19 AM

Michelle, the imagry in this took the reader with you...wonderfully full and descriptive

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

17 posted 2004-07-07 02:00 PM

thanks so much for seeing thru those baby blues with me

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

18 posted 2004-10-07 11:20 PM

if only to see them one more time

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