Open Poetry #33 |
I would wait for you |
Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
I would wait for you in the pouring rain,hold your hand forget my pain. Can't you see that I'm falling for you,won't you please let me through Smile upon your face the laughter in your place,the way you get to me all I can do is just breathe Take a plane to get to you,send a letter to get through,your the guy with the golden touch,Oh why do I miss you so much. Smile upon your face the laugther in your place,your just like me, both thoughful of each other's reality Look back on my angel,thats you touch my sould keeps me from the cold. Twinkle in my step makes me sail away. Smile upon your face,the laughter in your place Take me away with you show me something new the artwork is of my own makings Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... [This message has been edited by Foxyoasis (08-14-2004 04:38 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thoughful of each other's reality love the setiment, Julie M |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
foxy -- this was great -- you're very creative! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
very very nicely done, and I really like that picture! |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thanks only wish he realize how much i care n special he is i think he does i dunno Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
now this is pretty |
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Kevo Member
since 2004-06-02
Posts 466Navarro County, Texas, USA |
A beautiful write and a beautiful pic. You are jack of many talents. Your flow was refreshing and your imagery simply captivating. The picture only added to the beauty of the painting within the text. Warm regards, Kevin |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
aww thanks guys! Im going to read this to adam when I visit him I don't know when that will be. I hope he likes it Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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