Open Poetry #33 |
these masks we wear. |
exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
my head is pounding the words i long to say won't come out anymore they won't leave my heart building up i can't stay like this. conflicting emotions identity crisis so many extremes, of who i want to be it all seems so overwhelming i can't please everyone but i try so hard to please you.. everything about me right now was made for you selected words selected emotions it was all for you just another mask. if i showed you who i was you would run i know your type but.. being something, someone made for you seems to drive you away more. i don't remember who i am it's been so long.. my whole life i've wanted to be everybody else everybody..but me young by appearance only.. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Be who YOU want to be, you will be much happier....be happy and love yourself for you and don't try to change to please someone else.... If you keep putting on the costume..one day you will ripp it off and come out, because you can't pretend anymore...be real... Your identity was lost...because you tried to be someone you are not...for someone else to love you...You should watch the movie "Runaway Bride" The right person will love you for who you are...without the mask.. Love and Hugs ~ARH "The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched.They must be felt with the heart."~Helen Keller (1880-1968) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
written very well and expressive but i echo the words too of the poet above, miss romantic heart, wise words at that |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding well |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
I think you deserve to be loved and respected. Really enjoyed this piece. - James |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
bargh, you take words from my head. I like yer style and profile |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Always, always, ALWAYS, be who you are,,,if you arent accepted for yourself,,,the life of living a lie,,,leaves you empty and cold,,,wishing to be found,,,and ultimatly,,alone with the real you anyway,,, Michelle To be held, is all I ask...... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
exhale Take another breath your doing fine. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I know about this, boy oh boy tell you what, it was so much fun meeting me...becoming my own best friend, making my own decission, and most of all, getting rid of all the noise...sheeesh, the quiet is utterly music to my ears. SMiles and hugs...you are your own best friend and upon knowing who you are, where your going, you will identify your needs, and be confident in picking your own friends, instead of letting them pick you. smiles and hugs, great write |
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