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The Undoing
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The Undoing |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The Undoing Pushes my buttons always undoing them after, twisting me beyond flexibility but preventing the tears of strain by lip pouting, as I compare one to the other, having always hoped I would find a difference there... always hoping |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh... a treasure. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah |
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Pell Member
since 2001-09-16
Posts 134Pacific NW |
*sigh* ah man I'm living this right now...all I can do is put some tape on those buttons and believe there IS a difference. Vive le difference |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Interesting and intriguing. I like it.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Love the depth herein - very well done!! jwesley |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I am undone by this! |
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