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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Stubborn imprints colonize Birdwatcher midlands Silver candelabras Wide board pines Azalea-rich girlish butter Remembers with great pleasure Travel writers…wheels of willingness Passengers and double doors Signs nesting maternal Spitting images Changing with purpose Longing for intrusion Covering all bets Of nature’s interest Entering a church of art Sight-seeing Raphael Dousing lymph nodes Milestones wearing lipstick Where happy occasions Carefully sob Choosing words with great care The smell of prayer put to the test Is there one, who fights off gag reflex? Grand mama whispers through the front door Bout a casting call for ticket men Ones with silent coverage Doused in appointments Of which they keep Radiant and hopeful Void of running shoes They are there, filling life itself Repairing all cracks in their homes Checking bright eyed country For the prize bull Spending 6 years measuring my own stillness Operating room squeezes hands Save the inner voice, I whisper And for hours I listen Wondering where I was and why I could not see While recognized voices awaken me |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your writing has depths that I feel I can never reach... let alone sometimes understand. Still, there is a quality to your words that inspires me to continue reading. And that, my friend, is poetry. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you polish dishes doll sized ones with a velvet cloth and hold them up for the window to see kewl style ms lj |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very deep  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
alot of depth and thought gal.... |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
wow Lee, this is really deep....amazing write~ I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In your complexity, which is sometimes a challenge for me, I find beautiful tunes that I love to hear. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love that last verse, I can relate |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
LeeJ You play with words, like no other...hang them like so much bright clothing on the line in the sun and shadow...I love to read the depth of your poetic mind! "Where happy occasions Carefully sob" See what I mean? |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
very intresting, the complexity of each stanza increases as the poem ventures on. there are a lot of things the reader can take away from this poem, and each reader will take away something different. Awesome write! Enjoyed it! Pimpin and panderin, on a level you can't serve, dismantle, nouns, pronouns, adverbs, and verbs |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
You do write amazing poetry Lee J. Wonderful write here too. JL |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
very good......I enjoyed. Contabo |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I have, on more than a few occasions.... said..."I wish I could write like this"... I still do...and I will continue to say it. For I never will... Thanx LeeJ. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed....James |
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