Open Poetry #33 |
Tainted With Time ( inspired) |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
...Tired Thoughts fingers wishing to fast, wanting relief in the seeming of the night ~~*~~ dreaming of thinness and his touch wondering if a stitch or two here and there, would suffice ~~*~~ tainted with time, ribboned in red, white and blue I am feeling for the heartbeat knowing it no longer lives except in knots of once upons ~~*~~ matching black with lack or blue of two still learning curves the moods of you ~*~~ surround the sound of you in tense shadows wordings in my defense ~~*~~ listening still for the thump thump there passing eyes made full aware the walking to in front of then to touch or not the question when... ~~*~~ tired thoughts appease the mind encounters all in silent rhyme ~~*~~ the heart beats free if I walk your eyes the un nots a gift to the awareness of you ~~*~~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This had such a wonderful flow to it and felt like I understood it very much M. Hugs. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Donna I hope all is well with you and April. Some days, especially with this heat and humidity returning, I just feel so tired... M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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I always find a piece of me in your writing |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Wonderful creativity, Maureen, is what I always see when I read you no matter what the mood. ....jo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dixie thank you for always reading and responding to my words... if you find even one line that touches your senses then I am pleased. and I hope you weather the storms M |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Jo, you are much too kind *s |
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