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Tumbled Thoughts |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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Tap, tap, tapping, My fingers strike the keys. The hum from my computer, Helps to put my mind at ease. My dreams and my philosophies, Race across the screen. My monitor is a blaze of words, With no spaces in between. Tumbled thoughts keep pouring out, In a jumbled flurry. Fingers fly across the board, As my mind screams out to hurry! When the frenzy's over, Comes the time that I must edit, And hope that I can piece it all, In to a write of merit. Tap, tap, tapping, My fingers strike the keys. The hum from my computer, Helps to put my mind at ease. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-11-2004 04:04 AM).] |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Lucky you! I have the jumbled thoughts thing down pat. It's the tap tap tapping that I am having trouble with! HA! Great write! Remember me with a smile on your face, or please don't remember me at all. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Tumbling bumblebees, flurry and scurry across those keys, humming and buzzing the words spill out, stories and poetry of merit, no doubt  Keep them thoughts a tumbling.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
EA, I can just hear it....almost see it! This carried that same energy with it and I did feel it! Thanks. Hugs to you Energetic Earth Angel!  lily |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
That's why we're here, to edit out thoughts, and hopefully make sense of them. What a perk!!  Your writing eases my mind, always Linda~ Really nice poem~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lucie ~ I have to admit that it helps to be a very fast typist ~ keyist? lol ~ and I need to be! Jumbling thoughts often tumble out of me faster than a speeding locomotive!  EA  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan ~ That reply was adorable! ~ Just like the writer of it! Linda  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
iliana ~ ~ and I could feel the energy in your response, Sweet Effervescent Lily One!  Loves 'n hugs, Linda  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lori ~ ~ and that was a "really nice" reply! Thank you, Dear Bluesy One!  Huggums, Linda  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yea...it used to put my mind at ease...(if that's possible)...now it just gets me into trouble...so I just read what you think into typewritten wonderul words.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel So that's what you were doing all night? LOL great write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe ~ Good morning, my friend! Good to see you! Your charming reply has started me off on the right wing (or is it my left one?), this fine August morning! Cheery hugs and a big smile, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ Yes, it was! ~ and it kept me out of trouble and my halo hasn't slipped! lol  Morning hugs, EA |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Nice how you capture a timeless struggle, with our "craft and sullen art" in contemporary terms ~P |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
The hum from my computer, Helps to put my mind at ease well said... Linda, I enjoy the responses and your replies to them as much as the lovely poems you post hugs M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Well done Linda...much enjoyed! Just popped in for a short.. back to my 'Quiet Waters' of Rondeau Bay.  Hugs~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
choshi ~ My, how eloquent ~ and flattering! Thank you very much! Long live the craft! lol EA  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
p s ~ Condsidering the number of poems and replies that you have posted, I can well-imagine that you are "understanding" this!!!  Keep on keying and we'll keep on reading ~ and enjoying! Linda  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Naked One ~ An appreciative comment like that truly warms my heart. That was very kind and thoughtful of you to say! ~ and that is a reflection of who you, yourself are. Thank you, M!  Kiss the mirror for me! Loving Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 Nancy ~I cannot help but be a bit envious of your being by "Quiet Waters"! ~ But I most assuredly am happy for you and appreciate you popping by! Enjoy yourself, my friend! You deserve it!  Happy summertime hugs, Linda  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! And as always you know the formula to a beautiful poem always that can make anyone's heart smile, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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