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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-08-10 03:08 PM

Not so...

This layer speaks only of its
pressing moment.

Your fingers tell one story.

My lips holding the weight of
your caress...

Tell another.

There is completeness only on the
line we share in traveled
contact.

And every layer is a truth revealed in
the fullness of a moment.

Yet my lips whisper..."not so, not
so..." As they taste the gravity
of your fingers.

There is no truth, there is no
story and there are no
layers.

There is only the suchness of
your caress...

And the memories that fall
later.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-08-10 03:18 PM

Eric, this was extremely deep and beautifully done. Check your email please

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-08-10 03:20 PM

quote:
There is completeness only on the
line we share in traveled
contact.

You are the Master in rendering the fullness of the moment, in savouring the chalice of love to the very last drop ......
and with each drop you create ripples touching the heart .... where the memories linger ...
Not so?!
I love you.
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-08-10 03:26 PM

~ May all of your days bring sweet memories for your tomorrows...

EA

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-08-10 03:29 PM

Ohhhh Eric...this is so soft and sensual and so very lovely. This I liked, VERY MUCH!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 2004-08-10 07:09 PM

perfect

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-08-10 07:41 PM

So...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-08-10 11:24 PM

So very beautiful Eric!
Hugs~

~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world
....have obviously never danced in the rain ~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

8 posted 2004-08-11 01:05 AM

"There is only the suchness of
your caress..."

oh, my heart!

K

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2004-08-11 03:35 AM

"And every layer is a truth revealed in
the fullness of a moment.

Yet my lips whisper..."not so, not
so..." As they taste the gravity
of your fingers.

There is no truth, there is no
story and there are no
layers.

There is only the suchness of
your caress...

And the memories that fall
later."

*sigh* You have said this so well. I really liked the way you made this a one-ended conversation with touch being the other end of that conversation.

....jo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-08-11 04:41 AM

wow

wow

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

11 posted 2004-08-11 10:10 AM

One could become lost in such moments -

Beautiful.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

12 posted 2004-08-12 12:57 PM

wow deep indeed

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