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Open Poetry #33

sippin driver

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-08-10 08:10 AM

vanilla soup with strings
hearts and aces
up a sleeveless

could I be the jury
to find innocent candy
hidden under onion skin

with a chill on
and some virgin maturity
where handfuls wake

since 2am or later
and the sunshine waits
for darkness again

playing a 3 some
on the front fine
of an up to par 69

did you feel the river again
_______________
Dark

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2004-08-10 08:33 AM

From candy shops
to golfing tees...
your words are mystery
but still?

they please.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-08-10 08:42 AM

Candy Bouquet...flowers and balloons
sending a smile across the airwaves

this was enjoyable....

G'day to ya

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-08-10 09:27 AM

playing a 3 some
on the front fine
of an up to par 69

did you feel the river again

this left me with such a smile this morning as all of your words tend to do.

Very well done sir Dark....

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-08-10 09:51 AM

Dark,
I would say you have a low handycap. Enjoyed.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2004-08-10 09:55 AM

Hi DS

"vanilla soup with strings
hearts and aces
up a sleeveless"

How many ways are there to say how unique you are?

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

6 posted 2004-08-10 09:58 AM

heh heh
and all the world is green
jes like ol' tom said.....
K

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-08-10 10:20 AM

Hmmm, what lurks behind these lines? This one passes me by, though by reading some replies perhaps it has to do with golf? Ah, if so, that could explain my density.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-08-10 12:23 PM

yes

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