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Would The Story Continue
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Would The Story Continue |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Would This Story Continue The truth is never known Fantasy hides the fact Deviating from reality How good you could act Lines you crafted so well Was a true work of art Of scripted fantasies You perfected every part Masquerading in silence Creating yourself anew As the story continued Where only fantasy grew Dreams brought together The love of me and you You needed me then I know that much was true Would this story continue You gave no indication Is there another chapter To my desired destination Hope©2004 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your pen, dear Hope, questions beautifully. May your heart reveal the answers. Your heart knows. Love, Margherita  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
questions we must ask ourselves and sometimes answer ourselves, as well....bittersweet write, but beautifully expressed. Thank you for sharing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how it feels sending hearthugs |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perhaps...but you might be writing a new book by then....James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
What a hard place to be, this place of uncertainty. It is expressed well in this. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I believe in happy endings...most of the time wishing one for you  M |
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