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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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shimmer shine sky burned out lights behind the fog ol sea says maybe some other monday he will change the stars to neon says he is busy now puttin' knobbies on the yachts makin' their paint rough so they can scratch his wake when it itches when he is on a tide high heard him moanin' at the dock wood slider how she dangles her feet and says he is cold and he wonders why she keeps doin, it instead of wearin' shoes or the sand skin dunes __________________ Dark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger I asked the same question. Enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I to enjoyed...some very good writing here sir...wonderful images, as always, lest this one be no exception. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
High tide... I miss the feel of that particular motion... well done, Sir. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
says he is busy now puttin' knobbies on the yachts makin' their paint rough so they can scratch his wake when it itches when he is on a tide high You delight me with your descriptions. I love the image of this--  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Don't you just love that moanin' ? Brings back memories of  M |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
instead of wearin' shoes or the sand skin dunes ========================== you are just so kewl with those personifis |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe I'll go get some shoes |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
wear shoes and deny the pleasure of the waves lapping against my feet...never!! I find I can't board my boat and leave my shoes on, seems almost irreverent if you know what I mean Thanks for putting me back in the water this morning if only for a few moments |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I envy your proximity to the sea and how you know what it's thinking. Loved this: ! "says he is busy now puttin' knobbies on the yachts makin' their paint rough so they can scratch his wake when it itches when he is on a tide high" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
love seeing through your goggles |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
nice work, dark |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Your writing has so much soul. |
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