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the legends |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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the tick of the clock is pressing into time fall has left the mountains and is ... on the way back home ... a legend ... with a newly gathered vision from above weather changes signal the cycles are moving slow climate revamping into its own desires there is no end to the beginnings we are in this movie with bit actors running the show by completing the order of the directors open forums display your ways who seems lost in this maze a labyrinth we construct ourselves free from the witness of anyone true wisdom and thoughts not clouded in reasons the blind know there way in the dark bringing a light to reawaken the sleep of a thousand ages past dusting's revealing tablets of destiny books like the celestine prophecy crystal shard dream regards to the sender transcending angels tapping you on your shoulders whispers in the night a star guide to the heavens as maps in the sky ....hold our futures in hand JDWolf III 8-8-04 11:00 am |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your vision seems to have a little magic dust bringing it to life... A poem that changes the vision with each reading...well done... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Thank you , your so right star it had been a while since i last wrote freestyle or anystyle at that , i had the urge this morn so when that happens i dive in , into the sea of pip lolol |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I suppose ya gotta believe in somethin' |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"the tick of the clock is pressing into time fall has left the mountains and is ... on the way back home ... a legend ..." beautiful inspiration ... you have captured this feeling well! enjoyed this much!  I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
i suppose so passing shadows , lol ... greeneyes , nicey thanks sweets |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like the feel of this, the flow of the words, the mood they create. I really like the thought that there is no end to beginnings. Yes, I like this very much.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Aujussy Wolf, I found this to be a very enthralling read and am saving it to read again. ......jo |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
susan , lol i also like that idea : ) thanks for the reply iliana , super glad you liked it enough to read again , i tend to understand a piece the more i read them , the hidden bits become a little more apparent |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I want some of whatever you're having... Good and thought-provoking write, AW. K |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
lol ...funny kahlil , i like your sense of humor ...i like to provoke things lol even thoughts the wolf |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You dove into the waters with only a mere ripple...a ton of metaphors...and nicely done...Jump in again some time soon... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Life is really about a spiritual unfolding that is personal and enchanting -- an unfolding that no science or philosophy or religion has yet fully clarified." ~ James Redfield ~ * Wolf... This piece is much deeper than the surface depth of the words.. Ah, yes legends... I am often chastised for arranging them in ways to explain what cannot be, by scientific means.. My tormentors, oddly enough are mostly those who swear the earth was made in seven days. I do not try to rebut, as I am not sure if it happened in that way or not..but when I ask questions such as this.. How did Don Juan know that Carlos would arrive on an exact day in the exact place where he waited for him? ...I am told it was a trick or a hoax I guess we are all looking for Redfield's clarification, but as he states in the quote no existing "science or philosophy or religion" is helping us do so. It seems the answers are everywhere but no where at all, lying just beyond human perception...and that we will rely on legends to prove points until touchable proof is in our hands. enjoyed --------ice ><> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ "there is no end to the beginnings" ~ "a labyrinth we construct ourselves" ~ "the blind know there way in the dark bringing a light to reawaken the sleep of a thousand ages" ~ "transcending angels tapping you on your shoulders" These are just a few of the lines that beared repeating, Dear Spirit Writer!!!   EA |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
a poem that bears much reflecting upon |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Wow everyone else said what I was thinking. Love it. :-) |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
too cool ...these replys made me glow , thanks all of u , for helping me see what else is within ,, wolf |
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