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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-08-07 08:01 PM

look at me . . .

see the roiling pools
of passion's storm
mirrored in my eyes

seas awash
in gale force winds
of pleasure's rush

ride Neptune's tide . . .

the power of the Gods
reflected in your eyes
as union is met

in the tempest tossed
of lover's rapture

s.a.t.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-08-07 08:03 PM

Neptune -- whoa! You're in for a wild ride, sweet Susan! Very passion filled write!

....jo

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-08-07 08:08 PM

Thanks Jo. Going for the nautical theme here (or maybe naughtycal?

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Hugs to you -- Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-08-07 08:40 PM

Naughtycal....yep, me thinks it tis....

Nicely done..

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-08-07 09:57 PM

Thanks Barry

Susan

Hey, have you heard of the latest pirate movie that is out? I've heard it's rated arrrrrrgh!

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

5 posted 2004-08-08 08:07 AM

Susan
Be careful of Neptune..
That God is said to cast spells of fantasy over those who worship him, and that contact can cause disillusionment..
But then again, this is poetry and poets deal with these two phenomenon's all the time...
Reality sucks most of the time, give me a poetic outlook any day, just like the words that this piece describes...
------------ice

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-08-08 09:49 AM

Ice - I shall be very careful. But then again, what if I woo away from him his trident? Hmmmmmm . . .

I too will take the poetic outlook any day.

Thanks for your reply.

susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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