VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
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2004-08-07
09:50 AM
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Morning Pirouette
starlight upon the lawn the morning spawn of sun and dew
dreams cast within the rise as sweet Sol brings his surprise
glistening off the tangled webs thrown throughout the dark of night
captured cotton of ‘lion seeds an intriguing sight you’ll sure agree
black-eyed Susans stand in awe stretching toward the heav’nly draw
petals down like party dress as they stress the joy of summer’s dance
©August 7, 2004
Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.[This message has been edited by VAS (08-07-2004 12:23 PM).]
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© Copyright
2004
Virginia Salter
- All Rights Reserved
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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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2004-08-07
09:54 AM
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petals down like party dress as they stress the joy of summer’s dance
summers dance indeed Virginia. We should all take the time to have that dance. This is lovely, very well done.
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aujussy wolf
Senior Member
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215
Michigan
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2004-08-07
10:32 AM
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grand write vas , this line was a sweet one
petals down like party dress
would also be a great song too
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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-08-07
10:34 AM
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Very pretty -
SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
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2004-08-07
10:51 AM
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Magnificent...The vision you create makes me feel the rising sun....Stunning...
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Krawdad
Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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2004-08-07
12:51 PM
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smilin' at this thank you
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2004-08-07
06:42 PM
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I thoroughly enjoyed this "morning pirouette". ~ a summer dance divine!
EA
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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
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2004-08-07
08:02 PM
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This certainly brightened my day, VAS -- thanks for penning such a lovely poem! ....jo
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2004-08-09
12:38 PM
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dance while you can...summer will be gone in the blink of an eye
good write
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