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Druid Memory
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Druid Memory |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows 
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Bitter water on the tongue a path of broken rocks, sharply jagged bits of long lost shattered dreams, and in the end, the shadows whisper to me gently nothing's what it seems. ©2004 by icebox |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"nothing's what it seems." and that ain't necessarily a bad thing.   |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Believe it or not....in the end, I think we all have a good laugh. Enjoyed this, Icebox.  .....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes all you need is a whisper |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"nothing's what it seems" i hope not i really hope not |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Almost true....some things are what they seem. Finding those and holding on to them is the hardest thing a man can do, on this plane or any other. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Don't you just want to ignore those shadows sometimes? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like this. It has much depth and feeling behind such brevity.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
How true that can be...sometimes the greatest lessons in life are learned from that which is not what it seems....BRAVO!!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes indeed, this reads like a lesson well learned...wonderfully done |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
an answer to a koan, perhaps? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent sir |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Wow! You sure got this one right, icebox. To know things aren't what they seem is great but to know what they actually are - well, we just have to wait I guess. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
o yes just keep an open mind/heart and let yourself be surprised |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Druid Memory" ~ I have had a few of them myself! lol Some have been softly whispered while others come through like sharp shards of ragged rocks! Interesting write!  EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Icebox, I enjoy the way you write - and better yet, the comments you cause others to emote. Thank you! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
and in the end, the shadows whisper to me gently nothing's what it seems. Yes, 1000 percent! I do agree. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox Everything changes...the path, the rocks, the foot and the way it feels. Each minute is new. I guess the best we can do is understand the truth of the changing...and try and go with the flow. It helps to have a really good pair of sneakers too! |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
The more things change, the more they don't change at all. It was the same for Druids, as they learned in time. |
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