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Just You
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Just You |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Just You There is such promise within Your shining soul sweet one You have so much ability Like a soaring eagle You will continue to fly High and far On wings of gold you’ll glide Riding the thermals of power That you see and others ignore Maybe you don’t comprehend The beauty of your soul For I know you doubt yourself Yet, you don’t allow that doubt To hold you back You push on, continue Although the path is unclear You see the way, somehow, Then at just the perfect moment You illuminate the sky Bring all into focus And empower those who believe Maybe it’s your ability To enthuse and enlighten others That is your special gift Maybe its because you are Who and what you are One of the golden breed Who knows they have a destiny Perhaps it is your spirit Whose compassion and empathy Shines from within Clearing the darkness Bringing light, glorious light Where no glimmer had been before Your spirit reaches for others Enfolding them in your glow That you can and do Understand a soul And can read a heart That makes you special But for all that, despite your gifts Your unique and special essence You are still and ever will be Just you Marsha Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
this is so beautiful Marsha, and it is soooo very good to read you again. I adore your pic, so lovely it is. Hugs. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful just totally beautiful. Love it. :-) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...lots of feelings in this one...one of my favorites...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I don't know who you wrote this for, but it made me feel good about myself; so I'm sure whoever it was must be very touched by it. Thanks for sharing.  ....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 You are one warm, loving and supportive Mommy Birdie! Your little birdie will fly high with such love, guidance and support.A very touching write!  EA |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
How very beautiful...Your words create the light that engulfs the vision you grant...A mothers love flows brilliantly through your words...Wonderful writing...**hugs** |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ For all you are, I am *gifting* your words RIGHT BACK TO YOU~  Enfolding them in your glow That you can and do Understand a soul And can read a heart That makes you special' YOU are indeed so very special to me~ Love you girl~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you each and every one, this was written for a very special poetess, whose beauteous spirit, anoints my soul with its blessing. Her ever giving heart and her loving touch are always with me. She is so modest that she didn’t want me to dedicate this to her so I didn’t, but she knows its for her and I’m sure that most of you can tell it is. Be well, my dearest friends you are special, each one of you has a mighty ability to write wonders, and you do, you all do  Love you always And forever Mushy  Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds but I can face the future with courage brave and bold Footprints In My Heart Kethry |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This poem is such a beautiful gift... but even these words that touch my heart so deeply are eclipsed in beauty by the true gift... that of your friendship. *S* Every single word... straight into my heart. Thank you, my friend... for always seeing through loving eyes. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Just me?....Me?....LOL...very pretty write sweetie... |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
this was so beautiful, it made me feel good. a very touching poem "UH de nah nah nah..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
beautiful  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Revisiting...James |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Marsha This was such a heartfelt piece of writing and I believe these words apply to you. The beauty in your hearts shines brilliantly throughout. I love your new picture! Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful, touching words, Marsha...and I can think of several of your poetess friends that this can be gifted to. M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, the lady that this is written for is truly blessed by what you have given her in return. You are both blessed... And you wrote it beautifully... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
knowing the subject as well as I do, and loving the poem as much as I do, I would beg the poet's permission to add a jellybean trademark "ditto" this and she are precious |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your heart shines when you gift others, Marsha... you and your friend are held in warm HUGS... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm glad this one came back up... Perhaps it is your spirit Whose compassion and empathy Shines from within Clearing the darkness Bringing light, glorious light Where no glimmer had been before Your spirit reaches for others Enfolding them in your glow That you can and do Understand a soul And can read a heart That makes you special You could have written this of yourself, my friend... how many times have you reached for me just when I needed you? *S* I love you, my friend. *S* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
I'm glad to see this one again, because it speaks of the touch and the love YOU gift to me. Thank you my sweet and bright angel, you are far too modest darling one, how could anyone NOT love you and loving you not write words that speak of it. Thank you again every one of you for reading and feeling the truth in this. *S and thank you beloved one for the inspiration you are to me. Love you always lady as always Mushy   Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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