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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
An offered rose, with all its thorns and petals, blood red, fresh with life-- bursting forth from the blue vase perched on the fireplace mantle. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I see it. Well written.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Susan... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
choshi Enjoyed the read. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Sy, glad you enjoyed....~P |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
choshi, It is soooo good to read your poetry again. It's refreshing! miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Paul, this was a beautiful, vivid offering! Much enjoyed, my friend.  ....jo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
An offered rose, with all its thorns and petals, blood red, fresh with life-- bursting forth from the blue vase perched on the fireplace mantle. thorns and petals petals and thorns; if i shower you with the colors of my magic flowers, will you kiss my boo boo when the thorns must fall upon me? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A true offering of love ..... Beautifully said. quote: Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at inkedgoddess' thorn reply, yet it was a good one, too I enjoyed this, could almost see a perched rose on my countertop |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
LOL at inkedgoddess' thorn reply, yet it was a good one, too I enjoyed this, could almost see a perched rose on my countertop Thorny, yet very open and vulnerable and I am hoping to respond with a poem when something ripens into consciousness..... I am glad that you enjoyed this one Kacy.... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
choshi, It is soooo good to read your poetry again. It's refreshing! miscellanea Thank you ~M, Its nice to be meeting you and I will look forward to reading your poems....~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Paul, this was a beautiful, vivid offering! Much enjoyed, my friend Thank you Jo, I am glad you enjoyed and felt the vividness... ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
A true offering of love ..... Beautifully said. quote: -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- blood red, fresh with life .. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Love, Margherita Awww, Thank you Margherita, Love ~P |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
thorns and petals petals and thorns; if i shower you with the colors of my magic flowers, will you kiss my boo boo when the thorns must fall upon me? ~~~~~~<@>~~~~~~ From one root, emerging petals and thorns in-between- rainbow hues of the dream space the healing of shared hearts. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
From one root, emerging petals and thorns in-between- rainbow hues of the dream space the healing of shared hearts. yes, yes good interception!!!! but i'll still take a kiss for the boo boo.  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
From one root, emerging petals and thorns in-between- rainbow hues of the dream space the healing of shared hearts. yes!! good interception from total collapse.....lol but i'd still like a kiss on the boo boo |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
yes!! good interception from total collapse.....lol but i'd still like a kiss on the boo boo Only "a kiss?"  .... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and I enjoyed your pretty, poetic "offering"!  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful vision |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Earth Angel, Glad that you enjoyed Thank you Dixie....~P |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An offered rose, with all its thorns and petals, ~*~ More to this than is first seen...the last three lines make me see it, but the first two lines make me feel... more is there than meets the eye. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
More to this than is first seen...the last three lines make me see it, but the first two lines make me feel... more is there than meets the eye. Thank you Karilea, you are a deep and sensitive reader as you are a writer... ~P |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
an offering of beauty new, a sacrifice of love to you. and in the peace it sings would not its treasures bring more substance to its intent if this gift was kept rather than sent and breathed its life for you through window view... than left drying in a vase? nice to see you Paul missed you  |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
an offering of beauty new, a sacrifice of love to you. and in the peace it sings would not its treasures bring more substance to its intent if this gift was kept rather than sent and breathed its life for you through window view... than left drying in a vase? Such questions, nice to see you Paul missed you Nice to see you too Dawn .... Thank you for the gift of your inspired words ~P |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Simply lovely |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Thank you Hoot Owl Rn ~P |
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