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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ We have free fallen drifting through space like planets colliding sending sparks flying. And you are the brightest star rising up in the sky immersed in the clarity and loss of connection linking the chain of events that always floats back to me. Revolving around my world in spite of all things; I wear your charms like a silver bracelet that sparkles keeping it clasped, and I'll never regret wishing on you. For you'll always remain the warmest array, a flash back in time, and time again shoring up my resolve. You are all things I wonder, and a wonder to me, forever, evolving. ~*~ |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
Magnificent. Very touchng piece. I enjoyed this. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bluesy, I like the way your spirit surges thoughout your writing. This felt like a moment of truth. Truth can be sad and beautiful at the same time, and I felt that a little.  ....jo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So nice to see you here, thank you very much Kellie~ illiana~ You're such a sweetie, thank you for feeling my words right, you're so perceptive, (more than just a little) Hugs dear poetess. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I see this is one of your up moments..which I enjoy the most  sending hugs M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
always a star to be found and the star is YOU always dear bluesy girl |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I wear your charms like a silver bracelet that sparkles keeping it clasped, and I'll never regret wishing on you. ===================== That verse is one I wish I had wrote.. what a great analogy and personification. A bittersweet bluesy beauty... lovely lovely write Poetess Lori-girl.  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Bluesy, This is fabulous! It describes the feeling soooo well. I almost cut and paste the verse about the charms, but decided the whole poem fit together so much like a glove, I'd have to paste the whole poem. Consequently, I'll just move it to my library instead. Be well, Bluetiful Lady! miscellanea |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Dog-gone-it! I forgot to click that library box again! Not this time! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
It has a certain celestial attraction. It's nice to see you in orbit! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Mutual respect is worth it's weight in gold, just like some frienships endure and are there for the long haul, no matter what. It's like taking it to the next level, a higher ground so to speak, even if it means stepping away. Hence, my poem. Thanks~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Such things are as rare and beautiful as love -- and they may be even harder to find, because they start with love but don't stop there. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori, from your reply.. "It's like taking it to the next level, a higher ground so to speak, even if it means stepping away." This poem and yourself are very beautiful. Your words are full of wisdom. Sometimes the greatest show of love we can give is to step away. You've such a beautiful heart dear, don't ever stop sharing it with us. never.. ever. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori "Revolving around my world in spite of all things; I wear your charms" To care, "in spite of all things", is true and worthy, and not always easy. I commend you! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Heartbreakingly beautiful with a touch of sadness that shines in your words...**hugs** |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"You are all things I wonder, and a wonder to me, forever, evolving." Loved the above, Bluesy, in just another of your writes which I always enjoy. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you are so lovely sweet lady...and so good to see the smile! hugssss I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone though you're still with me |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Keep those lovely thoughts, but please realize, Dear Lori, that you are a beautiful and bright rising star yourself!  Linda |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Clarity can be such a bittersweet thing, well done! "A spring shower was cause to run |
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