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Magnus
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0 posted 2004-08-04 07:11 PM


I remember the clash,
of leather, lace and satin.

Soft skin filling each corner
of a black zippered piece of
femininity that made my
imagination pant from the
run.

Breathless, the raging heart
in rush....pounding the drums
of my ears as the air whisked
by....gambling at the next
turn,  seeking you.

And you, dressed to the nines,
disappeared into the shadows
of dusk....a faint giggle caressing
my ears....

Until we pass again, in the night
air of moon’s rest....

Perhaps then, I will....perhaps
then...

© Copyright 2004 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-04 07:13 PM


giggling here
now, where did I put that leather vest with lace covered satin?

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2 posted 2004-08-04 07:20 PM


nicely done sir...
Nightshade
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3 posted 2004-08-04 07:28 PM


yes...perhaps.
Excellent Magnus.
hugs, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

Susan
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4 posted 2004-08-04 09:08 PM


Ah, perhaps . . . yes.  This one makes me smile, I like its feel.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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5 posted 2004-08-04 09:49 PM


Heh heh...perhaps....yes.

Oh I think I just echoed my sister...

We both feel the same about your work it would appear.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world
       ....have obviously never danced in the rain ~

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6 posted 2004-08-04 10:38 PM


beautiful poem, Sir. I have missed reading your work.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


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7 posted 2004-08-04 11:54 PM


oh Barry, the opening lines imply so much...

"I remember the clash,
of leather, lace and satin."

I read this and think that the satin was discovered after the discarding of the leather & lace.

Quite a poetic feast...



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8 posted 2004-08-05 12:07 PM


Lovely.
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9 posted 2004-08-05 12:52 PM


Perhaps...James
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10 posted 2004-08-05 01:19 AM


We angels on cloud nine always dress to the nines!

Leather & Lace,
EA

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11 posted 2004-08-05 01:41 AM


Have to admit....this one made my pinks cheek, oops, no that cheeks pink! lol -- Passion at a high level!
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12 posted 2004-08-05 04:41 AM


mmm....very nice
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Listening to every heart
13 posted 2004-08-05 06:31 AM


You will, what?



Hmmmmm?

LeeJ
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14 posted 2004-08-05 07:25 AM


hiya Magnus, good morning

Lovely read you've given here..thank you for sharing your dreams...if dreaming with pure of heart, then, all will come in due time...and I'm in there rootin for ya
cause there's nothing finer, more valuable then true love.

smiles and hugs

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15 posted 2004-08-05 07:42 AM



i need to dig out my leathers and lace hidden away from days of old  me


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16 posted 2004-08-05 07:54 AM


Barry
Perhaps, perhaps, enjoyed the read.

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