Open Poetry #33 |
Leather and Lace, A Pretty Face |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I remember the clash, of leather, lace and satin. Soft skin filling each corner of a black zippered piece of femininity that made my imagination pant from the run. Breathless, the raging heart in rush....pounding the drums of my ears as the air whisked by....gambling at the next turn, seeking you. And you, dressed to the nines, disappeared into the shadows of dusk....a faint giggle caressing my ears.... Until we pass again, in the night air of moon’s rest.... Perhaps then, I will....perhaps then... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
giggling here now, where did I put that leather vest with lace covered satin? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done sir... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
yes...perhaps. Excellent Magnus. hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, perhaps . . . yes. This one makes me smile, I like its feel. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Heh heh...perhaps....yes. Oh I think I just echoed my sister... We both feel the same about your work it would appear. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
beautiful poem, Sir. I have missed reading your work. All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh Barry, the opening lines imply so much... "I remember the clash, of leather, lace and satin." I read this and think that the satin was discovered after the discarding of the leather & lace. Quite a poetic feast... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Lovely. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Perhaps...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
We angels on cloud nine always dress to the nines! Leather & Lace, EA |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Have to admit....this one made my pinks cheek, oops, no that cheeks pink! lol -- Passion at a high level! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmm....very nice |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You will, what? Hmmmmm? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hiya Magnus, good morning Lovely read you've given here..thank you for sharing your dreams...if dreaming with pure of heart, then, all will come in due time...and I'm in there rootin for ya cause there's nothing finer, more valuable then true love. smiles and hugs |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i need to dig out my leathers and lace hidden away from days of old me
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry Perhaps, perhaps, enjoyed the read. |
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