Open Poetry #33 |
bedlam ballet |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I brought you my vanity as paper poems in plastic they were ovaltine and okra you said you loved the southern deepfried and sundried checkerboard red and white with air fresh pine trees hanging from junk yard cars we watched the bedlam ballet army boots and bibbed tutus where the taxies roamed all night looking for prey that pays with stolen credit cards and the gays are not really but joined in the dance so they could wear the clothes and not be expected to be married by the priests that used to believe you were a forgiving God you yawned when I sinned and said you had seen it all done before and better by worse but if I kept trying I could be a hell of a sinner ______________ Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you said you loved the southern deepfried and sundried checkerboard red and white ~*~ I'd say teach me, but then I'd have to get in line... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well, kiddo I bet just about right now, as he finished reading this one, he's saying hmmmmm, he's a hell of a singer, now...not to mention, comedian, as he smiles a sense of humor emotion.... Enjoyed...hugs LJ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sinner or Saint, isn't it what's in the heart? I enjoyed this journey as well. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"you yawned when I sinned and said you had seen it all done before and better by worse" lol....indeed. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS So much dichotomy in all of us....you just make it look sexy! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice! Enjoyed!! JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
couldn't we all |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
grins |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Martie's right... "you just make it look sexy" grinning atchoo The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL just that, DS LOL, enjoyed the dance but I don't do okra |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Perhaps, but you're still one hell of a man. Somebody I can look up to, which is rare, and not too typical for my height~grins. Love, Reg |
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