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Where Oceans Meet
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Where Oceans Meet |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Bombay living room grins with lemon twists Teaberries unlocking kindness to mammoth Full minute prayers, pressed with flaming passports Between books of words created by a doctor With a Yale masters degree Stamped with care as a promise on our bosoms Let us stroll, if you like, the boards of Ocean City And find potential on the beach of day Dandelions exploding between our fingers Making a wish on the mouth of elemental ways Dancing on the ocean of finishing school Savoring elaborate inscriptions on silver dollars Only to set them free…we need nothing Halfback in what becomes known As we grow into formidable mankind And place our tie breaking vote That summer rocks for us, all year round Guilty as charged among friends Dreaming with every pinch of echelon Where beach surf tickles our toes Placing us at the mercy of ocean foam Intersecting high on the mountains Wide-eyed glows changing colors Breathing leisure with ease Voices blooming, echo us Sounds of nomadic tongues We leap onto black velvet horses Of night..Trading indelible imprints With the waking full moon over Carolinas Collecting sugar beets and sweet corn Holding our breath and turning mouths to the Gods Where Oceans meet, down the highways We find and begin Surrounded by Gods and Goddesses Telling us we exaggerate Can we? Still exaggerate? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ exaggerate? I think you have shown that here. LOL Good morning. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms LeeJ, movies set perfect 3D view with 4D depth, If I said I could exaggerate it would be a lie..kewl write ms |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“Let us stroll, if you like, the boards of Ocean City And find potential on the beach of day Dandelions exploding between our fingers Making a wish on the mouth of elemental ways Dancing on the ocean of finishing school Savoring elaborate inscriptions on silver dollars Only to set them free…we need nothing” Reminds me of that youthful carefree attitude when nothing mattered except for that very moment in time. Beautiful emotions in this write Lee J. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm with JL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sometimes I think you have a thought recorder implanted in your skull. Your poetry takes me places of ponder, lady. I find myself gleaning something new from every read--because, yes, it takes more than one read. Intense and yet somehow meditative. You are a long walk, lady, and I mean that as a compliment. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
and oh, how I missed your's as well. |
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