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Kind of a Familiarity - Ocean Music
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Kind of a Familiarity - Ocean Music |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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What steel limber gate frolics? Or long roman nights Carrying fragrant belongings Beneath annealed stars Low-seated mothering of rose Creating strange colorations of music Entering life of soul What sincerity of enthusiasm …sweet passions What giant holds ears of leisure so close? Admiring out loud…vocals Underscoring a coupling amphitheater Each unto itself, ingesting fruits Muttering explosives to anyone who would listen Red blood igniting kudos Writing it’s graffiti of assuming dimensions Incarcerations of visibility Caring fondness, with which men look upon women Teachers bringing children to school Nodding appreciatively Wine-splashed airstreams flaming surprise Showing whispered things Deep voiced promise Compressed easily, finding virtue in unpleasantness Having the forbidden pleasure Of balance, with the flesh of strings Closing one’s eyes and inhaling deeply Pure amnesia it sings Rite of passion Gesturing thoughts from a violin Encouraging visitations Brushing an imaginary look Counting every green emotion Private crazy gondolas Tasting hallucinations Where walkways lay between us Beckoning elusive verbal equivalents Canals of tremendous souls Friendly talons changing the nature of light What steel limber cohort frolics? Like untied long stringed shoes This river traffic of unseen apparition Where heavenly hosts bemuse Inspired by Adagio for Stings |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow, you got some great images here. enjoyed Maree  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms LeeJ..adagio for stings..that is that sticky stuff you put on bug bites right? sure was a nice view out this window, always wanted a window that went 360 and still could open....oh that is why I ride the black B..enjoyed it ms |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“Now the time has come to face, my untold fears Every waking hour, drained me through the years So that I'm not one with myself my strength, my gift Is destined to be forgotten I have seen the world begin, in the mirror of the past I pray the life giving force still holds the strength, to last As i lay dying I understand, The reason for my life My fear slips away, the new world begins.” ~Adagio “The Stringless Violin” Lee J: I can see why you were inspired. Beautiful write!! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
LeeJ, this was utterly amazing. Thanks for sharing it here.  ....jo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Utterly amazing is the best descript there is. Excellent write LeeJ. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
That music really inspired you deeply. Impressive write! Love, Margherita |
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