Open Poetry #33 |
Genesis . (20 or less) |
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
ashamed of its nakedness time clothed itself in music |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Bravo! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
How do you say it? Yowza!!!! misc |
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MexicoCityBlues Junior Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 48The Point of Know Return |
I love it. Short and sweet. "Do you realize this world is totally fugazi?" --Marillion |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is magic in the music, because somehow the words just fit so right, and strip us down to nothing. Pretty nice write, Ed~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh. Wow... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Do you know how it is to not recognize a truth until you read it or hear it spoken... but know instantly that it'll be with you forever? *S* YES!! Exactly so. *S* |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed So very true...music is timeless! This really is a wow! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
By Jove (Ed)....I think you have got it! Much wisdom within this, thanx.. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
very nice Ed. and now, we dance? you inspire. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes, wrapped in the silk of rhythm, wearing shoes of blue, and topped with a hat of sweet melody. What a lovely garment Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
This is a really great metaphor... brilliant Ed... and music is totally syntaxless but communicates universally -- its great! |
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