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0 posted 2004-08-04 01:27 AM



ashamed
of
its
nakedness

time
clothed
itself
in

music

© Copyright 2004 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-08-04 01:41 AM


Bravo!
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2 posted 2004-08-04 02:01 AM


How do you say it? Yowza!!!!  
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3 posted 2004-08-04 02:18 AM


I love it. Short and sweet.

"Do you realize this world is totally fugazi?" --Marillion

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4 posted 2004-08-04 02:34 AM


There is magic in the music,  because somehow the words just fit so right,  and strip us down to nothing.

  
Pretty nice write, Ed~

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6 posted 2004-08-04 10:57 AM



Oh.


Wow...

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7 posted 2004-08-04 04:00 PM


Do you know how it is to not recognize a truth until you read it or hear it spoken... but know instantly that it'll be with you forever? *S*

YES!! Exactly so. *S*

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8 posted 2004-08-04 04:49 PM


Ed

So very true...music is timeless!  This really is a wow!  

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9 posted 2004-08-04 05:37 PM


By Jove (Ed)....I think you have got it!

Much wisdom within this,  thanx..

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10 posted 2004-08-04 07:06 PM


enjoyed
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11 posted 2004-08-04 11:16 PM


very nice Ed.

and now, we dance?

you inspire.


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12 posted 2004-08-05 07:32 PM


Yes, wrapped in the silk of rhythm, wearing shoes of blue, and topped with a hat of sweet melody.  What a lovely garment

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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13 posted 2004-08-05 09:17 PM


This is a really great metaphor... brilliant Ed...

and music is totally syntaxless but communicates universally -- its great!

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