Open Poetry #33 |
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Forever Came Today |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States ![]() |
Forever Came Today By Paul Wilson I’d love too sit and talk about the good old days But what good would it do cause we went separate ways Friends forever we said but forever came too soon I watched you fall apart dancing too your own tune I tried too help you stop and take control again Demons fought together battles we tried to win The war rages on inside weakness you try to hide It’s taken everything you’ve even lost your pride The streets are calling you to come out and play The demons are waiting like they do everyday Night sky explodes into colors found in rainbows Lying face down in the street how long... nobody knows I find you like before and gather up the pieces We try too fight the demon your soul it slowly releases The Sun begins to rise with hope of a better day God please help my friend his forever came today "Dedicated too a dear departed friend " ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Paul, sorry for your loss. This was a sweet tribute. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How sad Paul..this touches deeply. Thank you for sharing. Heart Hugs ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very touching ![]() you expressed this quite well |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
very heart wrenching...to want to help someone so much....not for yourself but for them...somehow, someway, something good will come from all of this bittersweet write, from the very emotions of your heart. Hugs |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
iliana... Nancy Lee MGROOVES LeeJ Thanks all of you for your caring replies. This was just a passing memory from long ago.The healing is over, but the memory comes back every now and then...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
a beautiful dedication Paul. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
memories hurt when you can't make more... or when you couldn't make things better ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A beautiful dedication, Paul. Your heart shows throughout. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"The Sun begins to rise with hope of a better day God please help my friend his forever came today" That really says it all. Beautifully express Paul. God Bless! JL ![]() |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Susan...Thanks for taking time too read and reply. Glad you liked it...Paul Dixie...Thanks for the hugs.I guess all we can do is try our best. Maybe God needed him more than I did...Paul Sunshine...Thank you so much for your kind words. Thanks for reading...Paul JL...Glad you enjoyed this in some way. I appreciate your kind reply.Thanks for taking time too read...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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