Open Poetry #33 |
Constant Faith |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is always distance before a touch. In the absence of my body... I would linger as the void beneath your reach. Constant in the faith of offered flesh. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love this Eric..love the word 'constant'. Well done! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sigh, sigh, simply lovely . . . Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I envision your lovely words in a book of romantic verse entitled something like, "words of love" written on the page across the picture of a soft-lighted sensual scene of two lovers gazing at each other -- just beautiful, Eric. ...jo |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice. JL |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes very nice |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
The title befits the verse, and vice versa. Enjoyed this, m'friend. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am reaching across distance ... the souls' touch echoes through my flesh and I rise over your wholeness as the sun rises over Earth in a life-giving sacred embrace ... in mutual surrender we release our vibrations of love to the ever welcoming womb of Universe. Incredibly beautiful and stirring vision, dear Eric, Master of Love! You always inspire ... I love you. Margherita |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
In the absence of my body... I would linger as the void beneath your reach. ========================== *shaking me head* time and time again I read you and say... IWISHIHADWROTETHIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Stunning TD |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eric I can see that you are still making all the women swoon with your beautiful words. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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