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Weave the Want
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Weave the Want |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Weave the Want I passed the moon in its repose The almost full, in blue delight. Traveling north in tune with smile, A pleasant evening, with home in sight. Quiet roads give passion thought Shadowed only in yesterday feel. Beat of heart would rise in sigh, Each memory from evening's steal. An hour always, of chance to think, Reliving moments of nearness then. Preparing dreams caressed in lace Of summer's warmth, tomorrow's when. As I give in to day/nights end And weave the want, temptations blend. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"As I give in to day/nights end And weave the want, temptations blend." Great poem! Started my day out right.  ....jo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Jo... *s My evening was pleasant for a change and the moon was beautiful (the clouds had covered it the past few nights) M |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Quiet roads give passion thought Shadowed only in yesterday feel. Beat of heart would rise in sigh, Each memory from evening's steal. Maureen, this one has a peaceful feel to it. So, so beautiful, Lady. I love to read your poetry. By the way, sometimes I like to come in here and just read, quietly........ Love ya, sweet lady. Hugs, Ethel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Me too, Ethel. I have been reading more than responding...sometimes due to the heat here in the east and some days I am just very tired, stll trying to get into a more physical routine, but those anxious feelings tend to wear me down right now. Always good to see you. M |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
You weave words well enjoyed Gloom |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A beautiful weave to touch the heart.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you PG...some mornings after, my weaving is easier... Karen, hello...it is so good to see you back here... M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love your words |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The beautiful title pulled me in....and the words held me close in their own beauty. Eric |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Very nice, weaving the want, I like the sound of that.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Gotta agree with all the above! Very nice read. JL |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hugs miss M... nicely woven |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
as I do yours Dixie...thank you Ericc thank you..I wasn't sure about the title *s but it seemed to work. Thank you Susan. *s JL, glad you enjoyed my words. C, hugging back... it helps to have a pleasant evening before... M |
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