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reciprocal ocean |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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we were twins from almost birth and from different mothers that were connected through leave it to beaver later you were dark and I was identical but pale on purpose since I was taller you got to be the shadow you were an innie I was an outie we pretended to trade but gave them back when we were alone in our seperate rooms we went to school together at different schools we were inseparable like water and oil when it is cold we knew each other then better than the best friends we had never met and now we meet again for the first time back to back facing some reciprocal ocean ______________ Dark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You brought back a lot of memories for me on this...so I thank you, once again, for looking outside in. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow. dont quite have the words for this one. but i truly enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark, LOL enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"we knew each other then better than the best friends we had never met and now we meet again for the first time back to back facing some reciprocal ocean" Don't always have the time to sign D. But I'm always here reading.  Hugs~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"you were an innie I was an outie we pretended to trade but gave them back when we were alone in our seperate rooms" I liked this one very much....  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Amazing!  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Amazing write, Dark Stranger! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A powerful read that draws one to read it again and again... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a beautiful read, I thought at one time, I had this...my God, the passion/wants/desires for his sucess, which all happened, but unfortunately, didn't include me...sometimes life is like that, nature's way of saying, you were not meant to be, not in a mean way, but in a realistic way...he didn't love me the same way, now he's very happy, successful and perhaps, even in love with his real twin. We're all looking for that twin, and we all deserve to find them. Incredibly wonderful write, thank you for the memories and much hope for the future. Hugs...Lee J. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Reading your work is like taking a fast ride on a curvy road edged with the unexpected -- much enjoyed. SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Enjoyed this write very much! Good one. JL |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you were dark and I was identical but pale on purpose since I was taller you got to be the shadow you were an innie I was an outie we pretended to trade but gave them back when we were alone in our seperate rooms ============================ we knew each other then better than the best friends we had never met and now we meet again for the first time back to back facing some reciprocal ocean ============================== this is.......................... wowzers.... unbelievably cool.... *nearly speechless moth* lol |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Simply Awesome! I love the way you pen your thoughts DS. Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Our days run by too quickly... back to the top for those that missed you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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