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In the Confines
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In the Confines |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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In the Confines In the confines of my brain I throw the netting of my seine Pull the thoughts within my head And count the whales alive and dead Some I eat and some I fry And some I hang to simply dry They are my food and nectars blend To keep me from starvations end Then I walk in fields of green Plucking flowers from the scene Satisfied the meager fare But know tomorrow may be bare But in the overall of all My time is set the reapers call And I am also in the seine Within the circle of the chain Now isn’t that a dainty dish To be the whale to be the fish |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've got me swimming...  Good morning Sy! Float in those bubbles... it's going to be a hot day!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! It's hot and you got me to thinking I want to take off and go fishing... not for a whale though.  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Those who complain the sun has gone out of their world |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed this one |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Here it is going to rain, good morning sweet. Nancy, You would'nt want to catch these whales anyway.  MGROVES Glad you enjoyed. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But in the overall of all My time is set the reapers call And I am also in the seine Within the circle of the chain Now isn’t that a dainty dish To be the whale to be the fish A perfect write again, Seymour. Hugs, Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Now isn’t that a dainty dish To be the whale to be the fish" I have thought about this before (not exactly whales and fish, lol), and you have written it out so well! Much enjoyed.......jo |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A wonderful way to start the day with a read as good as this one...Wonderful writing with a vision that's clear.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It matters not how high up in the food chain that we be, we are still in the same seine that is to pulled out of the waters of life by that grim ole reaper. I suggest we all carry net-cutters!  Tossing you a life-line of starlight, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
...wow |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel Thank you dear, iliana Glad you enjoyed. Startime55 My pleasure, thank you. Earth Angel Always enjoy your humor.  passing, WOW yourself. Ericc Thanks for the great. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Some I eat and some I fry And some I hang to simply dry They are my food and nectars blend To keep me from starvations end ================================ I got the tartar sauce and fries.  and that verse is so cool its KOOL AID. *L* dont forget to send me some more poems when ya get time.  I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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