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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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the distance is a saffron wall paper seagulls fly paired in groups: nature drops hints of romance on cue, two shadows embrace and these eyes turn away in a rapid escape giving way to the privacy of the moment yet, at the same time stifling the swelling of sobs grains of sand hold the glaze of retreating footprints while reflecting a haunting capture of time ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoy these glimpses of the world through the eyes of your poetic soul...  Linda |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
~so many images. loved: 'the distance is a saffron wallpaper'. pleased to have read this,... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This...is tendersweet... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...how beautiful |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Like usual, you are amazing! Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
saffron wallpaper, hey, can you tell me where I can get some of that? Big smiles I loved this read...beautifully done |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SudhirMyFriend~ You write with the ink of illustrious hue~ This is a WOWSER~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
grains of sand hold the glaze of retreating footprints while reflecting a haunting capture of time Such a lovely soft scape to this. Very beautiful work, Sudhir~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful lovescape my friend. Soft and gentle. Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I find this to be beautifully sad. ....jo |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Your thoughts and words are much appreciated... Thank you...  Regards to all, Sudhir |
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