Open Poetry #33 |
Of What Has Settled |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Of What Has Settled The mist now hangs about the moor Where wisps of dewdrops gang in lure Shedding hews of morning’s glory Views for us a brand new story It fades within the curtains call To introduce the actors thrall And settles back into the air To grace its treasures with its heirs And we the audience of choice Now lend the choirs of our voice Touch and feel the face of awe Upon the spilling of the pour The miracle of countless trace The pinnacle of living grace The act to me that seems Divine An act of love in its define And If, I can’t believe my eyes Then why should I so fear demise? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The miracle of countless trace The pinnacle of living grace The act to me that seems Divine An act of love in its define ============================= AMEN Sybabers... AMEN!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Then don't settle, and stay around for a long long time to show us the way. Right? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, WWRS Looking good Wish you lived next door. Sunshine, I'll try but no guarantees. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mr. T. ~ You are immortal in my books! Yes, we do cast off these feet of clay ~ and that ain't so bad! They're heavy suckers and weigh us down preventing us from flying high and free! I may often write airy-fairy replies to your poems, but I do appreciate the wisdom and depth of feeling that are inherent in each one of them. EA |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wouldn't ask that you guarantee something that isn't yours to give, but just continue to smile for as long as you live! Right? Right!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I know you do, You are an Angel after all. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Right, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Seymour, your poem carried a particular beauty with it that I think Janet Marie captured nicely. Thanks for sharing, dear Man. I came back to add that fearing demise is a natural thing, and learning not to fear is, too. Big ....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana Thank you sweety, enjoyed your reply. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
You're welcome, sweet Seymour -- but you are too fast for me; hope you got my edit. *smile* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love the daily Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana, Got ya. passing, How can I losse with you in my corner. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good day Sy, hope you had a splendid weekened couldn't start my day without a fix of your poetry, both wise and tender music |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm late I know, but I didn't miss out on your daily write! And an excellent one this is dear Sy! ~Afternoon hugs, Nancy~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ And I wait for your replies. Nancy You are a dear. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ Your writes are of solid gold ... a wealth untold~ A treasure found within the hue of these pages blue~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my friend... these words touch deeply. *S* What a beautiful write! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern |
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