Open Poetry #33 |
So Sorry |
Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
so sorry I didn't mean to... your words imbed prick my heart I care I didn't mean to do anything except offer my friendship still, I wonder am I friend or enemy? |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
whether a friend or an enemy? I think a friend. At many times in my life, I've wondered the same thing. Could relate to this well. Enjoyed. miscellanea |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I would guess miscellanea is correct in this. ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
thanks you guys... |
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Lethe Junior Member
since 2001-04-10
Posts 36Blackforrest |
Much enjoyed. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
"your words imbed prick my heart I care" The pause before "I care" says alot, it makes the two little words so much stronger. ~Broken~ |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Thank you Lethe Broken, I appreciate your specific comment - it's embarrasing to care sometimes - aarg |
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