Open Poetry #33 |
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I love you I love you I love you (two of two) |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods ![]() |
I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU You make me feel You make me see What I could not Sense before Sweet bliss You rain on me And a blessing breeze Guides our flying machine Through skies of hope And clouds of joy I hope you find in me The joy I found in you You make me feel Love I love you I love you I love you [This message has been edited by Broken (08-01-2004 11:47 PM).] |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
Whomever this is for is truly blessed with your sweet emotion and words...enjoyed... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Ah, to be in love... This is fresh like Spring! Enjoyed. miscellanea |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Very nice -- heartfelt. ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I love you" ~ those three little words can move mountains! ~ and may they be said to you with as much depth of emotion! A pleasure to read! Love & Light, EA |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Broken, this was really sweet. Someone must feel pretty special about now. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a flying machine...yes...nice thought |
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