Open Poetry #33 |
Hey Honey |
whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Hey Honey Do you know The way I see you Do you hear The voice with which I long Do you feel These arms which need embrace Do you see These eyes looking upon Do you want The way I want you Do you think The way I think of you Do you open The way my soul is to yours Do you need The way I need you Hey honey Do you love The way I love you ? "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I hope he does...because you obviously do love a ton worth of it of him.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely piece full of such longing... well done Hugs~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sweet as honey!!! Enjoyed! Huggums, EA |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I sure hope the feeling is returned. These questions can plague one at times, wondering the answers. Nicely said. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Hey honey...James |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
sassy sultry sublime and... the poem is nice too |
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elfine Junior Member
since 2004-06-08
Posts 35traveling |
your poetry these past few days is full of such yearning ... the fact that the questions are left unanswered in the poems is both effective and almost wistful. I hope there's someone out there answering them the way you deserve! -elfine |
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