Open Poetry #33 |
The Moon's Aftermath |
icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
the lovers wander wastelands of dissembled dreams lost eternities ©2004 by icebox |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The same clouds called to assembly waving goodbye perhaps? sigh It's strange times astrologically, and it only gets stranger as mercury goes retrograde next week. (Remind me, this time, to keep quiet, will ya?) How about a Lammas poem? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
IceBox~ Oh my ... so little ... so lot~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Icebox, this is an awesome write, deeply melancholic, but ... often so true! .... "lost eternities" ... indeed love is eternal as long as it lasts! But then, there is a special kind of Love, that just IS.... and we can never lose it. Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
When pine trees whisper, The moon lowers her white lamp~ Leans down to listen. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
How very astute and wise this is -- that seems to be exactly as it is outside of my world. Today, 'though, I have a strange sense of calm before the storm. Serenity's comment about Mercury may have something to do with that, I 'spect. Much enjoyed (please keep 'em coming) .......... ....jo [This message has been edited by iliana (08-02-2004 12:12 AM).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
icebox The lovers linger the imprint of there time still apparent on grass |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yep, I see them wander and wonder every month, year after year enjoyed this moon perspective |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
So much said in such few words |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
short sweet very powerful I love it Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
yes, they do you are right on |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah |
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