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Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-07-31 02:13 PM

"Passing by"

I have pulled pedals off each flower
and still I have no clear conclusion.
I walked backwards through leveled mountains
while caught up in disalusions;

I can yet remember you today,
I hate when the past passes me by
like when I forget that one smile
You make when the world brings you up high.

The only time is whats passing by
Like the years that I have spent away
every moment you had my heart
Till the one day we were pulled apart

Passing by
I still try

Juju- dedicated to an old friend.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2004-07-31 05:36 PM

Juju, you have written your feelings very well here. Might I make a suggestion?
Do a spelling check before you post your poetry. The incorrect spelling of a word can really take away from the beauty of a poem.
Believe me - I know.

Keep on writing!! hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-07-31 07:01 PM

A heartfelt dedication!
Love, Margherita

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-07-31 07:13 PM

I can tell this was from your heart, Juju.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

4 posted 2004-07-31 08:38 PM

(: thank you that made me smile.
What did I misspell I typed it on Microsoft word???????? Spell check really stinks.

Juju

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

5 posted 2004-07-31 08:50 PM

you want.. petals (as in flowers), disillusions and i'm pretty sure, what's

~~~

i really like this line
"..."when the past passes me by"

there is something about it that
keeps grabbing me on each read

snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

Juju
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since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

6 posted 2004-07-31 09:51 PM

Thank you for telling me... its kind of embarresing........

Thank you,
Love, Juju

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

7 posted 2004-07-31 10:01 PM

please don't be embarrassed, it really does happen to everyone. just happened to me the other day and thankfully someone let me know. ;-)

hugs,
snow

"Kind words can be short and easy to speak, but their echoes are truly endless."
--Mother Teresa

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2004-07-31 11:09 PM

Juju - no, don't feel embarrassed! Heaven's I have to keep the dictionary right here at the computer 24-7 .... LOL. I just mentioned it because I know I would want someone to tell me. hugs, Chris

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-08-01 04:44 AM

NIce...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-08-01 04:52 AM

a heartfelt write here

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

11 posted 2004-08-01 12:06 PM

Thank you!
Juju

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