Open Poetry #33 |
Momentary Contact |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Everything we taste... Delights in momentary contact. Feel the night pass sweet against the lips. This kiss...so full in its desire - We meet the world on lips that part to the grace of what the moment offers. Everything we taste... Dissolves in the pleasure of this passage. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked the flow Juju |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh yes, reading you is like catching a ride on a moon beam, sheer beauty. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
So true. So beautifully put! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ericc One could say that. Enjoyed |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Definitely a moment to be cherished. Lovely, Eric... ~tier |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
And all to be savored. TD |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well if this doesn't wet one's whistle... Well done, Sir! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Eric, you sharpen my awareness with your beautiful words and I taste this moment of the night to the fullest ....it holds love.... a momentary caress, like a drop of honey tasting so sweet and nurturing deeply ... I love you. Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Eric, you are a master of the short though fantastic.... May your pen never dry of such words you give to us. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Eric...a wonderful write! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Aaahhh... what sweet, sensual imagery in magic poetry. I love it!! I love you, Moca |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Most definitely *s M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
part to the grace of what the moment offers. Everything we taste... Dissolves in the pleasure of this passage. Ummmm....sounds like quite a kiss, dear Eric!! Hugs, Ethel |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Sensually beautiful... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
I always enjoy spending a moment reading your poetry. No matter what mood I'm in, it transports me to a peaceful one, filled with a smile. You're a gem. Thanks, Eric. miscellanea |
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