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danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

0 posted 1999-12-11 09:37 PM

This was inspired by all of the wonderful poets here in Dark Passions. I hope you enjoy!

The melodies ring
from every word
Sorrow's felt
in every note
Playing the story
of our lives
adorned with tragedy
pain and guilt
It flows into
the lonely hearts
and plays upon
the questioning mind
Comfort is sought
within it's rhythm
Finding something
with which we can relate
Finding out
were are not alone
It is our Dark Symphony

I hope this has done justice to all of you here.

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-12-11 09:58 PM

Danni, this is simply wonderful and an honour to us all. Beautifully worded - "Our Dark Symphony". We should make that our theme song!! Bravo and thankyou

The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

mojar
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 169
granbury, texas, usa

2 posted 1999-12-12 02:08 AM

danni, you are the song that flows from the heart and spirit, the voice of millions, and you just sang my song. mo

summer
Member

since 1999-11-23

Posts 80
long beach .ca.usa

3 posted 1999-12-12 02:09 AM

I agree with Isis.."Our dark symphony" I loved that..Thank you aswell for this one ..It feels good to know you belong to something that people charish as much as yourself..

medusa
Junior Member

since 1999-12-09

Posts 23

4 posted 1999-12-12 03:55 AM

Thankyou danni! you have definately served justice for me and i'm sure others in this piece!!!!!!!!!

lostboy
Member

since 1999-11-21

Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA

5 posted 1999-12-12 09:07 AM

danni, what an honor indeed. I surely relate to you and your thoughts through your writing. It is nice to know we truly are not alone. You are a wonderful soul with a beautiful heart!

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

6 posted 1999-12-12 03:10 PM

I can't thank you all enough. I wasn't sure how that poem would be taken. All of you here have had an impact on me in my time of need. I feel comfortable and at home here. It's something I haven't felt in a long time. I just wanted to let you all know what you mean to me. So THANK YOU VERY MUCH!

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